Our holiday writing moments


In the first week of term, R9 wrote some stories about things that usually happen in their holidays. They were trying to add a list sentence and a personal comment or thought to their writing.

They have done amazingly well at trying these tools in their writing!

The kids then recorded their own stories and uploaded these themselves to dropbox, ready to go on our blog. 



SoundCloud - R9's Holiday Recordings



8 comments:

  1. Caitlin16 May 2014 at 13:55

    Wow!
    What great stories R9! I loved how you recorded yourselves saying your stories - what a cool way to present your work :)

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  2. R918 May 2014 at 14:57

    Thanks for listening to our stories! Hope the cross country goes great tomorrow.
    From all of R9
    Hayden Rules

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  3. Anonymous23 May 2014 at 16:25

    boys do not rules girls rule ha ha ha ( bailey)

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  4. Anonymous25 May 2014 at 21:34

    Great story Bailey! Not Baked Beans Nana...

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  5. Unknown29 May 2014 at 20:38

    Hayden I won't to get the app that we did it on
    From Sam p

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  6. Anonymous29 May 2014 at 21:41

    I love the stories R9 they are cool ,awesome ,hard working ,and exciting from bailey and my mum

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  7. AA4 June 2014 at 13:10

    These stories sound great - I like your expressive reading too ~ Amy A

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